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The First sentence (translated become 2 sentences)
1	The first Indonesian youth congress was held in Batavia, capital of the then-Dutch East Indies in 1926, but produced no formal decisions but did promote the idea of a united Indonesia.	Kongres Pemuda Indonesia pertama yang diadakan di Batavia, ibukota Hindia-Belanda pada tahun 1926. Kongres ini tidak menghasilkan keputusan resmi tetapi hanya mempromosikan ide negara kesatuan Republik Indonesia.	I think it’s better delete the word “yang”to make sentence more effective, because of full stop.
The first sentence part 1
	The first Indonesian youth congress was held in Batavia, capital of the then-Dutch East Indies in 1926,	Kongres Pemuda Indonesia pertama (yang) diadakan di Batavia, ibukota Hindia-Belanda pada tahun 1926.	Using modulation technique because”comma” is changed by “full stop”.
The first sentence part 2
	but produced no formal decisions but did promote the idea of a united Indonesia.	Kongres ini tidak menghasilkan keputusan resmi tetapi hanya mempromosikan ide negara kesatuan Republik Indonesia.	Using  technique of addition because it adds “kongres ini” and deleting word “but”

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The Second sentence
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	In October 1928, the second Indonesian youth congress was held at three different locations.	Dua tahun kemudian tepatnya pada bulan Oktober 1928, diadakanlah kongres pemuda Indonesia kedua yang dilaksanakan di tiga lokasi yang berbeda.	Using addition technique, it adds ”Dua tahun kemudian tepatnya pada bulan”
The third sentence
	In the first session,	Pada sesi pertama,	Using technique of transposition
	hope was expressed	terungkaplah harapan	transposition technique
	that the congress would	bahwa kongres itu sebaiknya	Transposition technique changes the meaning of would (akan) becomes should (sebaiknya)
	inspire the feeling of unity	menginspirasi rasa persatuan	Deletition technique “the” and “of” menginspirasi rasa akan persatuan
The forth sentence
	The second session saw discussions about educational issues. In the third and final session, held at Jalan Kramat Raya No, 126, on October 28 participants heard the future Indonesian national anthem Indonesia Raya by Wage Rudolf Supratman	Pada sesi kedua diadakan diskusi tentang isu-isu pendidikan, sedangkan pada sesi ketiga dan sebagai sesi terakhir, yang diadakan di Jalan Kramat Raya No, 126, pada tanggal 28 Oktober, semua peserta mendengarkanlagu kebangsaan Indonesia “Indonesia Raya”, lagu kebangsaan masa depan Indonesia pada saat, yang diciptakan oleh Wage Rudolf Supratman.	It would be better delete words pada saat. transposition technique when Det+Nà N+Det
	The second session saw discussions about educational issues.	Pada sesi kedua diadakan diskusi tentang isu-isu pendidikan,	·         Using additional technique by adding“pada” ·         Using modulation technique“diadakan” subtitutes  “melihat” ·         Using transposition technique,“full stop”à”comma”
The fifth sentence
	In the third and final session, held at Jalan Kramat Raya No, 126, on October 28	sedangkan pada sesi ketiga dan sebagai sesi terakhir, yang diadakan di Jalan Kramat Raya No, 126, pada tanggal 28 Oktober,	Using technique of addition, “yang.”
	participants heard the future Indonesian national anthem Indonesia Raya	semua peserta mendengarkan lagu kebangsaan Indonesia “Indonesia Raya”, lagu kebangsaan masa depan Indonesia	Using technique of transposition.
	the future Indonesian national anthem Indonesia Raya by Wage Rudolf Supratman.	lagu kebangsaan Indonesia “Indonesia Raya”, lagu kebangsaan masa depan Indonesia pada saat, yang diciptakan oleh Wage Rudolf Supratman.	using technique of transposition. Using technique of modulation Oleh (by)àyang diciptakan
The sixth sentence
	The congress closed with a reading of the youth pledge.	Kongres ditutup dengan pembacaan Sumpah Pemuda.	Using technique of reduction.  (Sebuah pembacaan dari Sumpah Pemuda)

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The seventh sentence
	Youth Pledge.	Sumpah Pemuda	Calque technique, one of direct technique that included loan translation
The eight sentence
	Firstly We the sons and daughters of Indonesia, acknowledge one motherland, Indonesia.	Pertama Kami poetera dan poeteri Indonesia, mengakoe bertoempah darah jang satoe, tanah air Indonesia.	1.      Using technique of transposiition. 2.      Using technique of established equivalent 3.      Using technique of addition “bertumpah darah”)
The ninth sentence
	Secondly We the sons and daughters of Indonesia, acknowledge one nation, the nation of Indonesia.	Kedoea Kami poetera dan poeteri Indonesia, mengakoe berbangsa jang satoe, bangsa Indonesia.	Using technique of transposition Mengakoe satu bangsaàmengakoe berbangsa yang satu
The tenth sentence
	Thirdly We the sons and daughters of Indonesia, uphold the language of unity, Indonesian	Ketiga Kami poetera dan poeteri Indonesia, mendjoendjoeng bahasa persatoean, bahasa Indonesia.	technique of transposition Poetera-poetera àpoetra Poeteri-poeteriàpoetri

Source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Youth_Pledge